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Rating: PEGI-12/PG-13
Link for Mobile Users: bit.ly/2tzr3cO
There are going to be people mad at me. Very mad. ... part of me feels like I should be ashamed.
Not exactly the first thing one would want on a new profile, but hey. It is what it is. I hope it will be something enjoyable.
Just as a heads up, I'll be re-posting this on my older account (thekittylizard.deviantart.com) some time later.
Lastly, (to further echo the note in the main file) I have nothing but respect for the people depicted in the story. I do not wish anything that happens in this story to happen in real life upon them, and I will not write them into situations that I would not write myself into.
... I feel like I'm forgetting something. ... I'm sure I'll remember later.
Have fun. ~Lioness
~Change Log~
(Jan 8, 2017): Edited some of the dialogue in the SUV scene so it's less jarring and awkward. Also tweaked a bit of grammar toward the end.
(June 30, 2017): Major edit. Shuffled around several scenes for pacing reasons. Added Link to document for Mobile Users
(December 4, 2017) Shuffled to scraps.
Addendum: I still really like the premise of this fiction, but without the other two acts I had planned, and its current written state, I can't help but cringe in a bad way re-reading this. Thus, I cannot with good conscience keep this in the featured part/main body of my profile. I may one day revisit this concept in some form. Thanks to the kindly folks who enjoyed this piece for what it is; I hope the new iteration of this incomplete concept entertained you and continues to entertain you from the scrap box. ~Lioness
Link for Mobile Users: bit.ly/2tzr3cO
There are going to be people mad at me. Very mad. ... part of me feels like I should be ashamed.
Not exactly the first thing one would want on a new profile, but hey. It is what it is. I hope it will be something enjoyable.
Just as a heads up, I'll be re-posting this on my older account (thekittylizard.deviantart.com) some time later.
Lastly, (to further echo the note in the main file) I have nothing but respect for the people depicted in the story. I do not wish anything that happens in this story to happen in real life upon them, and I will not write them into situations that I would not write myself into.
... I feel like I'm forgetting something. ... I'm sure I'll remember later.
Have fun. ~Lioness
~Change Log~
(Jan 8, 2017): Edited some of the dialogue in the SUV scene so it's less jarring and awkward. Also tweaked a bit of grammar toward the end.
(June 30, 2017): Major edit. Shuffled around several scenes for pacing reasons. Added Link to document for Mobile Users
(December 4, 2017) Shuffled to scraps.
Addendum: I still really like the premise of this fiction, but without the other two acts I had planned, and its current written state, I can't help but cringe in a bad way re-reading this. Thus, I cannot with good conscience keep this in the featured part/main body of my profile. I may one day revisit this concept in some form. Thanks to the kindly folks who enjoyed this piece for what it is; I hope the new iteration of this incomplete concept entertained you and continues to entertain you from the scrap box. ~Lioness
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That's amazing! I love it!